Wow-eee! At first I was feeling pretty good about the drawing on the left. It felt like I had the construction pegged. Then stuff started to happen. Or, rather, not happen. It ended up looking stiff and flat. The facial features are blah, expressing I don't know what.
I scribbled out a "rough" of this pose next to it to try to loosen up. I feel better (slightly) now. That is to say, I'm making some course corrections and might not hit that big cartoon iceberg.
Sure hope I have some more time to draw this weekend. See youse on Monday!